From my previous double page spread I have changed a few things. Instead of having white, gold and black I have black, white and red. I have added more images of my model, mainly so the audience knows what he looks like as it was not showing. I have played around with a few fonts and picked urban fonts for the titles. Other than that I've made little improvements (adding a website, changing position of logo) to make it look better.
ebi: take off the grey image. make the small sub images larger and move them.
ReplyDeleteneeds an enlarged quote. columns could be narrower and moved down. needs the writer and photographers name.
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