www: image is nicely lit. ebi: more thought on the layout design. the headline needs to be bolder and i don't like the wording. standfirst needs to be smaller and mention the artist name. columns are not even and there is not enough text. no enlarged quote.
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ReplyDeletewww: image is nicely lit.
ebi: more thought on the layout design. the headline needs to be bolder and i don't like the wording. standfirst needs to be smaller and mention the artist name. columns are not even and there is not enough text. no enlarged quote.
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